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Light pleads my eyes to open,
a tender kiss upon my forehead,
guiding into a warm embrace.

Water flows about my body,
a soothing coolness
relaxes aching bones.

Music and laughter engulf me,
as a pair of lips touch,
then part ways. and repeat.

My mind wonders the skies,
leaving behind thought bubbles
as an idea runs off, a path made.

Sunset lays on my soft skin
as a darkness shadows over light,
blues and purples trade places with shades of red.

I close my eyes, and feel the sun,
tracing my body with fingertips,
a gentle caress in goodbye.

Then I begin again.
I'm slowly heading out of a writer's block and this is my first product since a while.
Let me know what you take it as (:

Thanks to my friends for helping me out with a title and for liking the silly thing.
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tanafeyroyale Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is lovely
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BottledButterfly Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much.
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tanafeyroyale Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YW
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Jonot Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
I'm with Miss-TaDa, this tells a nice story between Sun and Earth.
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BottledButterfly Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much.
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Miss-TaDa Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GASP!
All this...OMG....
Reminds me soooooo so so much...
Of my character Earth and her relationship with the Sun
Feeling the Sun by Miss-TaDa
You've written this so perfectly, I just love it ^^
THANKS MUCH :iconjano233: for sharing this with me ^^
This made my day ^^
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BottledButterfly Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Writer
Wow, you hit it right on the nail!
I hoped I was clear enough, but with your reaction and compliment I feel a lot better about it. Thank you so much!
When I wrote it I wasn't aware of your story or characters, but :iconjano233: told me you would like it and gave me a link to your group and art. I really appreciate it and I am glad I made your day!! That makes mine :D
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jano233 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its beautiful :icontearsplz:....MissTada must read this 
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BottledButterfly Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you Jano. (: And thank you for sharing this with her.
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KahunaSniper Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And she said she wouldn't post this amazing piece of art. =)
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